Time Exposure is a mystery that takes place during the Civil War. I wanted readers to abandon the present and immerse themselves in those brutal, tumultuous years of the mid-nineteenth century. Scene by scene, chapter by chapter. Well, I wasn’t there, so how could I paint a picture of that time period, accurately, vividly, and with painstaking detail?
Research, of course, but research using primary sources whenever possible. What does that mean? There are many books written about the Civil War. About the battles, about the people, about the politics — the operative word being “about.” These sources are written today by historians looking back in time. I wanted to go back there myself. How?
Primary sources are the ones that deliver the information firsthand. Photographs are an excellent way to learn about the past. In my case, tens of thousands of Civil War photographs are available, yes, through books and online, but also at the Library of Congress, where there are drawers upon drawers filled with folders of photos taken back then. The originals, if you can imagine!
Other primary sources of an historic period are letters or journals. Using the Civil War as an example, there are books of letters to and from soldiers and their loved ones. If you use credible authors, ie: Ken Burns, you can be sure these are the true words of the people of the time. If you are really lucky, you may be able to track down a diary written from the time period. A friend of mine’s ancestor was a soldier in the War and he passed down some interesting paraphernalia (no journal, unfortunately.)
Very important primary sources are books written by someone of the time period. An example, which helped me shape my scene at the Union Hotel Hospital, was a precious thin book called Hospital Sketches, by Louisa May Alcott. Louisa May was actually a minor character in my book. If you ever wondered what it would be like to volunteer as a nurse in a hospital during the Civil War, listen to Louisa May:
“My three days experience had begun with a death, and, owing to the defalcation (I had to look this one up!) of another nurse, a somewhat abrupt plunge into the superintendence of a ward containing forty beds, where I spent my shining hours washing faces, serving rations, giving medicine, and sitting in a very hard chair, with pneumonia on one side, diphtheria on the other, two typhoids opposite, and a dozen dilapidated patients, hopping, lying and lounging about, all staring more or less at the new ‘nuss,’ who suffered untold agonies, but concealed them under as matronly as a spinster could assume, and blundered through her trying labors with a Spartan firmness, which I hope they appreciated, but am afraid they didn’t.”
From this one simple paragraph, I learned about the hospital, the patients, the illnesses and Louisa May’s (and other nurses’?) attitude toward them all.
In addition to Louisa May Alcott’s writings, I examined photographs, I read letters, poems and the words of songs written during the time. As I kept reading, I got a feel for the rhythm of speech of the period. I learned some of the basics: what the people of the time ate, drank, smoked, what they wore, how they amused themselves when they weren’t killing each other on the field, what their sex lives were like (there are some bawdy postcards out there!) Essentially, I learned how they lived and, sadly, how they died.
Bottom line: If you write historical stories, (or even modern stories about places you’re not familiar with,) what you don’t know can hurt you. The best way to find out what things were really like, is to do your research through the eyes of those who lived it.
There are no shortcuts. Ideas welcome.
Great post. I had the privilege of creating a novel based on a journal of 1856-58, and careful study of just what was in the journal of daily farm life. Between the lines I saw or imagined a lot, too. But the primary source material (when it’s reliable, as some government records are not, e.g.) yields much more than does an account or a report of what is in the primary source material. 🙂
Thanks, Cindy. It’s hard to keep your imagination out of the research!
I have two books of historical fiction on amazonkindlekdp select and they are taken from true stories using fictional characters ie Kinmel Revisited ,set in 1919 in Kinmel Army Camp in North Wales.After the war the governement were unable to supply the ships to take out allies home so during the interim period camps like kinme were to house some 20,000 men of the Canadian Expeditionary Force.The camp was unfit for purpose and lack of pay induced the men to riot and during said riot five young men were killed and are today buried in the local churchyard with the Maple Leaf Emblem on thier gravestones,This is there story. A Bolt From The Blue is set in Halifax Nova Scotia in 1917.At 9am on a cold snowbound scenario two ships collided in the harbour killing and blinding almost 2,ooo people.A tragedy that made the headlines on that fateful day ie December 6th 1917.
Both sound interesting, Robert. Thanks for your response.
Excellent points, Lynne. It takes more time and effort, but sometimes the one-on-one conversations with “someone who was there—or knew someone from that time” can yield up lovely gems that would otherwise stay lost to us. Your intense research certainly puts the reader in the time and place, making the story believable! I had no idea they had so many actual photos from the Civil War!
The photographs from the Civil War are truly amazing. Thanks for your comments, Indy!