Time Exposure is a mystery that takes place during the Civil War. I wanted readers to abandon the present and immerse themselves in those brutal, tumultuous years of the mid-nineteenth century. Scene by scene, chapter by chapter. I wasn’t there, so how could I paint a picture of that time period, accurately, vividly, and with painstaking detail?
Research, of course, but research using primary sources whenever possible. What does that mean? There are many books written about the Civil War. About the battles, about the people, about the politics — the operative word being “about.” These sources are written today by historians looking back in time. I wanted to go back there myself. How?
Primary sources are the ones that deliver the information firsthand. Photographs are an excellent way to learn about the past. In my case, tens of thousands of Civil War photographs are available, yes, through books and online, but also at the Library of Congress, where there are drawers upon drawers filled with folders of photos taken back then. The originals, if you can imagine!
Other primary sources of an historic period are letters or journals. Using the Civil War as an example, there are books of letters to and from soldiers and their loved ones. If you use credible authors, ie: Ken Burns, you can be sure these are the true words of the people of the time. If you are really lucky, you may be able to track down a diary written from the time period. A friend of mine’s ancestor was a soldier in the War and he passed down some interesting paraphernalia (no journal, unfortunately.)
Very important primary sources are books written by someone of the time period. An example, which helped me shape my scene at the Union Hotel Hospital, was a precious thin book called Hospital Sketches, by Louisa May Alcott. Louisa May was actually a minor character in my book. If you ever wondered what it would be like to volunteer as a nurse in a hospital during the Civil War, listen to Louisa May:
“My three days experience had begun with a death, and, owing to the defalcation (I had to look this one up!) of another nurse, a somewhat abrupt plunge into the superintendence of a ward containing forty beds, where I spent my shining hours washing faces, serving rations, giving medicine, and sitting in a very hard chair, with pneumonia on one side, diphtheria on the other, two typhoids opposite, and a dozen dilapidated patients, hopping, lying and lounging about, all staring more or less at the new ‘nuss,’ who suffered untold agonies, but concealed them under as matronly as a spinster could assume, and blundered through her trying labors with a Spartan firmness, which I hope they appreciated, but am afraid they didn’t.”
From this one simple paragraph, I learned about the hospital, the patients, the illnesses and Louisa May’s (and other nurses’?) attitude toward them all.
In addition to Louisa May Alcott’s writings, I examined photographs, I read letters, poems and the words of songs written during the time. As I kept reading, I got a feel for the rhythm of speech of the period. I learned some of the basics: what the people of the time ate, drank, smoked, what they wore, how they amused themselves when they weren’t killing each other on the field, what their sex lives were like (there are some bawdy postcards out there!) Essentially, I learned how they lived and, sadly, how they died.
Bottom line: If you write historical stories, (or even modern stories about places you’re not familiar with,) what you don’t know can hurt you. The best way to find out what things were really like, is to do your research through the eyes of those who lived it.
There are no shortcuts. Ideas welcome.
This is great advice, Lynne! To extend it to writing in general, I would like to add that so many aspiring writers write [i]about[/i] characters instead of [i]from the eyes[/i] and other senses of those characters. This keeps the reader at a distance, imho. This habit is actually a form of instruction of the reader, aka tell.
Thanks, Leonardo. Haven’t heard from you in a while. Been busy writing, I hope?
Among others, yes 🙂
My second book, Noblesse Oblige, will see the light this fall. Unfortunately in Dutch only …
Excellent points, Lynne. And I agree. When we can’t actually go back in time, we can learn as much as possible about life back then and weave those details into the story. I especially like your point about getting a feel for the rhythm of the dialogue. Thanks!
Thanks, Indy. You are a master at doing your research, so I appreciate your comments!
Luckily, historical research is lots of fun. And people who don’t find it fun probably shouldn’t be writing history!
I agree!
Excellent advice. Research should always look at primary source, whether writing a book or an essay.
My Historic Fiction is kind of pre-history. Celts before Jesus didn’t really record anything. They went for word-of-mouth. Thankfully, Caesar did, so the later BCE era was recorded.
I’m needing to use timeline accounts of battles between sects that can be determined through archaeology, not primary sources. I am hoping I do my Historic Fiction justice, as I would like the YA audience to learn something as well as be entertained.
Again, great advice.
Thanks a lot, Conner. Good luck with your research!
Hi Conner,
I was thinking whether you are familiar with “The daily Life” series. It contains books on ancient Rome, a.o. I also have The Encyclopedia of the Roman Empire. In case you are interested, drop me a mail at pisano(dot)leonardo57(at)gmail(dot)com and I can send you stuff I collected over the years.